Paranoia
Dan Storey
16.2: M
16.3 M WT D sound used to establish crime and track sets
mood, works with images, continuity mostly though the walk into camera shot
though imaginative is not achieved. Lacking pace but structure clear.
22.3 M WT D costume, props,
location and mise en scene a range of shots used with appropriate framing, some
clunky edits walking to camera, seems underdeveloped however like a teaser
rather than complete narrative (twist is not apparent to audience). Depth of
field skills used well in places and have meaning at times using focus pulls.
Lighting is restricted to natural some shots use day for night and grading some
not? Genre is clear. Non-linear missing with the absence of a flashback or
montage for the D at the end?
My comment on the feedback: With the feedback given back from the assessor, I do agree with the comments that the short film of Paranoia was good but there is technical flaws within the film but next time, it could be improved next time.
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