Targets (Improve my work to an better grade)

Targets (Improving my coursework: Prep)

During this prep task I am going to be writing up an list that I need to do is by improving my coursework to an higher grade because I would have looked at the feedback that I have looked at through the videos on YouTube that my teacher has done.

Task 1: Purpose of Music Videos

In terms of this task, here are few things that I need to improve the work to an higher grade from high pass to Merit or Distinction standard:

• Highlight the section of each purpose in Bold to understand what I am talking about in general.
• Embed the videos into each section of purpose of music video.
• Explain each section in clearer detail of reasoning why it is.
• Make sure that the Spelling and Grammar is correct.
• Check the sentences makes sense for the reader.
• Make sure that Capital Letters are being done as it is common to do when you are beginning to write an sentence.

Task 5: Pitch

For the pitch of my unsigned artist's track and their image, here are some things that I need to improve on to get an higher grade in the pitch:

• Being able to be more confident when presenting my idea to the camera.
• Refine the idea of the music video as it was complicated at first.
• Talk about each section in clear way.
• Do not stutter when I am speaking.
• Use the terminology that is set out in the blog
• Know the genre of the track well so it is easier for yourself to understand what you are talking about.
• Have to clear idea of what is happen in the music video in terms of the narrative
• Upload the video of the pitch onto the blog.
• Answer the questions in a correct way.